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To improve my magazine I need to edit my masthead, by cropping out the white patches. Also my front cover image is too small and needs to fill the front page completely. Moreover I need to check and change the layout of my writing and fix any spelling mistakes, this could include re-wording some sentences, so they make sense. Furthermore I need to get rid of some green bits around the images as it gives it a neon colouring, which I don't want.The positives of my magazine are that it looks like a authentic music magazine and also my pictures are of a decent standard and aren't pix-elated. Lastly I would grade my magazine at around a D grade, I would like to achieve at least a C grade.